原文英文错误太多，只能猜测想要表达的意思，据此将原先的错误英文予以修改：

What do young people think of places in town?

年轻人认为城里各个地方如何?

We did a survey of the Green Middle School students and this is what we learned.

我们对格林中学进行了调查，结果发现。

Most students think the old Cinema is the best because it has the biggest screen and the also the cheapest.

绝大多数的学生认为，老电影院最好，因为它的银幕最大，同时也是最便宜的。

As for clothes store, the Miller’s is the worst because it has a really bad selection.

至于服装店，米勒服装店是最糟糕的，因为它的款式实在不好。

Most students love Jazz 107.9 FM because it plays the most interesting music.

绝大多数学生都喜欢调幅107.9兆赫频道的爵士音乐，因为它所播放的都是些最为有趣的音乐。